LSC designs 2010

Hello this is my first post about my artwork collection :) pls feel free to comment~
This is my final design for the Lifeskills camp 2010. Firstly, i think that it is too small ( paper is A3 and the whole thing did not even cover half the space). Secondly, i felt that more creativity should be put in. thirdly, from this piece of work, i realised that we should keep in mind the general appearance of the design on a shirt and whether people would be comfortable wearing the design.

Draft of design one on above.

(same problem of being too small :/ )Draft of design 2 and 3...

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